8 Replies to “Mystery Part 2”

  1. A lot of detail went into this scene. I really like all of the small things, like the cookies and milk, present boxes, and fish bowl, and how everything else comes together with these things to paint some dark, possibly creepy story. Good job.

  2. I know you said you might change the story, but I really enjoy the irony of the bright, happy-looking scene and the dark story behind it. You did a really great job adding so many details and colors.

  3. The way you made the broken glass is really creative, and the transparent colors are a cool addition. I think the tree will really pop even more once it has some texturing, so I’m looking forward to the next steps!

  4. I like all of the detail that went into this scene but I think the one thing that stands out is the tree. I think if I were to do it, I would make the divisions of the tree more drastic and further apart, even if it makes it look unrealistic. The tree still gets its point across though and the rest of the scene is great.

  5. There is a lot of detail in this scene. From the glass on the floor to the layers of the tree, every object seems to have a place in this scene. I like the fragments of glass left on the window and the clear fish bowl especially.

  6. Awesome job on all of these objects! I love the shattered glass on the floor. However, I would have put remains of the shattered glass on the rim of the window to make it more obvious that it is broken.

  7. Lots of work clearly went into this scene. I love the dresser, it looks great. My one critique would be the window, would’ve loved to see some glass still in the pane, i think it would’ve added a great visual to the scene.

  8. I like how many objects you populated the scene with. It makes the scene look realistic. It is impressive that you even included a picture on the wall.

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