I do not know why everything is so dark. On the Maya Render screen everything was much brighter.
Some things you might not be able to see well. On the bar there are 3 gold coins which is what they use for currency in the movie. On the wall, “Baba Yaga” is written out of what is supposed to be blood.
Beer Bottle
Behind Bar
Bourbon Glass
Pencil
Set
I really like the name written on the wall in blood. You chose a really appropriate font and it helps get the point of the scene across, even without the dead bodies.
This scene would really come to life if there were some dim lighting placed here and there and would compliment the well thought out placement of all the objects within the bar.
The pencil looks great and I’m not really sure how you made that one piece separate colors. Also, the detail you put into the cup makes it look like a real glass cup that would be in a bar.
Your objects are modeled extremely well and look very realistic. The color used and choice of material has strengthened these objects even further. However, I feel like some of this detail could have been but into the background of the scene. As you said in class, adding some cabinets and other tables and chairs would have definitely helped the scene as a whole.
The modeling done on each of the objects is really well done, but they look a bit small when looking at them in the scene. Making them a bit bigger so that people can see how detailed the objects are would make the scene look better, but also make it feel more full.